An American Marriage by Tayari Jones fulfilled the category “Book that Has Won the Woman’s Prize for Fiction” for the PopSugar 2021 Reading Challenge. It won in 2019.
This book illustrates the reason I do not read literature. It was good but didn’t seem deserving of such an honor. Let me give you some background.
The novel follows a newly married couple (about eighteen months) who are thrown into terrible circumstances beyond their control. Roy is falsely accused and convicted of a crime and sent to jail. Celestial, his wife, is tasked with helping with her husband’s defense and keeping the marriage together. They face a long and bumpy road.
I won’t give away spoilers, but honestly, I didn’t care for either of these characters. Roy, though in terrible circumstances, seems to take out all his problems on his wife. He accuses her of things she didn’t do and is crushed as the marriage falls apart. Celestial, on the other hand, does not stand by her man. She tries to keep living her own life, find new love, and pursue her dreams. She’s a limp fish. These two were doomed from the start.
I don’t love best sellers and these literature-type books. The genre seems to sacrifice good story for drama. They focus on the wrong part of the tale, giving the audience a false sense of the importance of the narrative.
In An American Marriage, we never get deep into the characters’ conflicts and feelings. We stroll along through the novel with half-confessions and hints of a deeper situation. I never connected with the characters.
Roy was in prison. There’s a story. Focus on his trials and survival. Make me feel for Roy. Don’t just throw in later that he was stabbed. I want to see that event, feel his pain and fear. Not hear it as an afterthought.
I don’t understand why this won a prize for women’s fiction. It’s not Celestial’s story. We have little connection with her. She acts like no woman I know. She’s cold, distant, seemingly unfeeling unless she’s being denied what she wants. Why are we celebrating that woman? She cheats on her husband, does not grant her husband a divorce, and she just lays there when Roy breaks into her house and tries to have sex with her. I can’t sympathize with this woman.
I’m not saying this is a terrible story. There are many good things about it. I was more interested in the healing at the end. When things came to a head, there was this “Well, it’s over. Here’s the epilogue.” I would have loved to hear their struggle, growth, and change from the climax to the epilogue. Anyway, it’s well-written and compelling but so not for me.
I give An American Marriage by Tayari Jones Four (or fewer) Historical Hickory Trees.